Iron Legacy: Legend of the Alchemists

Iron Legacy: Legend of the Alchemists

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88,369 parole (≈ circa 6 ore)

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It wasn’t always like this. Her thoughts of the halcyon days of peace were cruelly ripped from her mind as she returned to reality, the dark, crumbling world that had now become commonplace. The days weren’t always filled with screams of agony and despair; the streets weren’t always lined with bloody, broken bodies.… (più)

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lylekelley3
lylekelley3
Lun 25 Feb 2013, 20:55:31 +0100

Needs a lot of work, to many adjectives, Needs editing. The story/plot isn't too bad, but it reads like there is more than one narrator, finishing each others sentences. Most scenes have too many words, and descriptions go on far too long. Action scenes are broken up with too much interior dialogue.



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Lingua: Inglese

Scritto in: 2012

Pubblicato: 2012-02-27

Numero di parole: 88,369 parole (≈ circa 6 ore)

Licenza: Attribution non commerciale e derivativa (cc by-nc-nd)

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