The Last to Have Sex

The Last to Have Sex

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2,336 parole (≈ 9 minuti)

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To put it simply, Jerome was fat. His only erogenous zone was his mouth.

But putting it simply didn't do justice to the rolls of flesh he carted around daily, the sheen of sweat that trickled from his pits, his forehead, his belly.

Putting it simply didn't do justice to Jerome, for though he was simple of mind and large of body, _he was_, for better or worse, a human being. And despite appearances, an evolved human being.

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SRDavis
SRDavis (2 libri)
Gio 25 Feb 2010, 16:30:34 +0100

Very descriptive, the main character makes you feel simultaneous pity and disgust. The end left me feeling slightly disturbed - so job well done!


kaolin
kaolin (3 libri)
Ven 16 Ott 2009, 08:18:16 +0200

I'd love to know what you think. This was an earlier piece of mine, and rough, but "sex" sure seems to be popular regardless. :)



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Lingua: Inglese

Scritto in: 2002

Pubblicato: 2009-09-29

Numero di parole: 2,336 parole (≈ 9 minuti)

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